Doctor of Education, English writing for research, dissertation & literature lessons in Denver

Abadi I was impressed by your paper and enjoyed reading it a great deal. I think your overall conceptual framework is well developed. Your paper is well thought out, you do a good job of organizing and supporting your arguments, and your sentence structure is fairly concise. I sometimes rewrite a paragraph or a sentence 10 times to remove excess language and be more concise. I really like that you have a straightforward approach to your writing, many writers are overly elaborate thinking that improves their writing. The biggest gap I saw was the iterative process of simply labeling/naming transition sentences, which was an easy fix, Thanks fo letting me help you. You have a very bright future. Good luck. - Joel

Maddie was excellent. Very smart and a quick learner. She showed great skill and adept understanding in completing her Graduate Capstone Action Research study. She was working full time in summer school when completing this study demonstrating great deal poise under pressure. Great job!